 Snoogans775
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Date: August 12, 2005 @ 12:28 AM
fairly predictable synth line, I wish it would do something a little more powerful.
the silence in the section between the verses was a little draining towards the song.
I like your voice a lot, it has a very ominous quality to it.
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mattbanx
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Date: August 12, 2005 @ 7:13 AM
Thanks for your comments, Snoogans775.
You affirm what I was thinking about putting more in to that.
I was thinking of a heavy bass drum going between the verses with bass. If I could get the recording in line for that.
I don't know what else I can do with the keyboards. I meant it more to accompany.
Maybe some added instrumentation to go along with it.
I sure would'nt mind if someone played around with that to see what they could come up with.
I have the back up WAVE files.
Thank you for the compliment with my voice.
I felt dark singing it. I'm glad you caught that.
I'm going to check out your stuff when I can get by my computer long enough today.
I hope you keep these critiques coming.
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leplume
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Date: August 17, 2005 @ 3:29 PM
there's an ominous quality to this that i like. its funny but the hesitation between versus actually added to it and i dont know if you meant for it to be that way. with some tightening of this, this is on its way to being a lovely dark piece.
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 tooles
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Date: February 10, 2006 @ 3:53 PM
Yeah, I hate nitpicking about production, mostly cause I'm pretty terrible at it too, but I did feel that this could be much more solid with a little more time spent on recording and nailing down some little things. That said, I love the spacy, dark foreboding feel this has to it. Your voice definitely has some great emotion to it.  Nice job dude.
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