Date: August 14, 2005 @ 11:29 AM
nice playing there... some pretty cool melodies and hooks. tempo seems to flutter a bit, though. it's a bit distracting at points.
Date: August 26, 2005 @ 9:17 AM
I think the song and lyrics are really cool. The vocal melody works nicely against the bass line. The one thing you need to do is sort out the drum beat - it sounds like it's unquantised and the timing wanders a lot which is a shame because this song is pretty good otherwise.
Date: September 8, 2005 @ 3:12 PM
I agree about the drums, but hey - it gets the idea across, and no-one expects you to be perfect. And if it is intended - then all the better
This is an eerie tune, and you have a great voice. Reminds me a little of Tom Petty in places (your voice)
Great song.
DeadraveN
tempo seems to flutter a bit, though. it's a bit distracting at points.
psypig
FraDonaghy
